Monday, January 4, 2010

Poem


Poem


White,
perfect white.
Like silence of the night,
expectant
and nervous.
Cold
as if frozen.
Virgin and flawless.
The white sheet of paper.

Is my poetry really good enough for this?





chirag bangdel
(earlier published in my collection “Fermenting Flowers”)

5 comments:

  1. White is a magic color. Here's another 'white' (By Lou Reed/Velvet Underground)

    White light, White light goin' messin' up my mind
    White light, and don't you know its gonna make me go blind
    White heat, aww white heat it tickle me down to my toes
    White light, Ooo have mercy while I'll have it goodness knows

    White light, White light goin' messin' up my brain
    White light, Aww white light its gonna drive me insane
    White heat, Aww white heat it tickle me down to my toes
    White light, Aww white light I said now goodness knows, do it

    Hmm hmm, White light
    Aww I surely do love to watch that stuff tip itself in
    Hmm hmm, White light
    Watch that side, watch that side don't you know it gonna be dead in the drive
    Hmm hmm, White heat
    Hey foxy mama watchin' her walk down the street
    Hmm hmm, White light
    Come up side your head gonna make a deadend on your street

    White light, When I moved in me intween my brain
    White light, White light goin' makin' you go insane
    White heat, Aww white heat it tickle me down to my toes
    White light, Aww white light I said now goodness knows

    White light, Aww white light it lighten up my eyes
    White light, don't you know it fills me up with suprise
    White light, Aww white heat tickle me down to my toes
    White light, Aww white light I tell you now goodness knows, now work it

    Hmm hmm, White light
    Aww she surely do moves me
    Hmm hmm, White light
    Watch that speed freak, watch that speed freak everybody gonna go and make it every week
    Hmm hmm, White heat
    Aww sputter mutter everybody gonna go kill their mother
    Hmm hmm, White light
    Here she comes, here she comes, everybody get 'n gone make me run to her

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  2. thanks a lot aunty, love to the kids :)

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  3. great stuff Thomas.........thanks for sharing :) wish u all the best for a great 2010. cheers!

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  4. u r very talented bro..............keep it up.....

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