10- Oct- 2009, 8:34am
As the first yellow ray
of sunshine
glimmers on a strand
of a golden straw of a thatched house,
a new born baby yawns
to new born day,
as the first wisp of smoke
from a mud house
makes its way to join the clouds,
as a mother and wife
rattles pots and pans
to feed her family.
As a proud man wakes up
to nurse his blisters in hands
and washes himself up in
a sputtering tap,
I write this poem for you.
chirag Bangdel
your words,
ReplyDeletepaint the picture..
as it opens up
we touch it
to feel the gritty edges
of reality.
Keep it up.
Best..Narottam
Thanks a lot Narottam :) appreciate it!
ReplyDeleteBeauty in Simplicity
ReplyDeleteLife in Words
Inner Peace
Outer Strength
COMPLETE , FULL N BEAUTIFUL !
Thank you very much Niharika :)
ReplyDeleteI feel as if this poem is somehow related to me. Great poem!
ReplyDeleteCheers
Renu