Saturday, August 21, 2010

Humble (the morning poem)



10- Oct- 2009, 8:34am


As the first yellow ray
of sunshine
glimmers on a strand
of a golden straw of a thatched house,
a new born baby yawns
to new born day,
as the first wisp of smoke
from a mud house
makes its way to join the clouds,
as a mother and wife
rattles pots and pans
to feed her family.
As a proud man wakes up
to nurse his blisters in hands
and washes himself up in
a sputtering tap,
I write this poem for you.



chirag Bangdel

5 comments:

  1. your words,
    paint the picture..
    as it opens up
    we touch it
    to feel the gritty edges
    of reality.
    Keep it up.
    Best..Narottam

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  2. Thanks a lot Narottam :) appreciate it!

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  3. Beauty in Simplicity
    Life in Words
    Inner Peace
    Outer Strength

    COMPLETE , FULL N BEAUTIFUL !

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  4. I feel as if this poem is somehow related to me. Great poem!
    Cheers
    Renu

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